1 Research Question
Why have Jews been discriminated against so much in Europe?
2 Thesis Statement
the reasons why Jewish people were discriminated can be explained by
A the difference Jews and most European people in religion
B the fact that the Jews have been treated as scapegoat
C the influence of Jews on economy in Europe
3, Introduction
A AG show some statistic date to make you know how horrible discrimination was
B BG the history of antisemitism in Europe
C thesis statement
4, body
A Jews are discriminated because of their religion
a Jewdaism concept that they are chosen people are blamed by Westeners
b some Christian believe that Jews killed Jesus Christ
B Jews were regard as scapegoat, or the Devil
a What is scapegoat
b in Middle Ages, Jews were considered to be responsible for Black Death.
c after World War 1, they are blamed for the Germany problems by Hitler.
C Jews has been s great impact on economy that are to be blamed for
a How Jews has a power on European like create a bank
b Jews lend a lot of money and earn by charging interest, which is against Cathoric
5, Conclusion
It is quite difficult to choose only one cause for discrimination against Jews. Rather, it would be better to judge the reason for the discrimination from various perspective.
Hi Shoji,
ReplyDeleteThis is basically a good outline, but I have some suggestions as well.
I think this type of analysis is basically OK for an outline, but I also feel that you are mainly just summarizing the different "reasons" for discrimination, which are quite factual and seems a bit like background.
To go one more step, how about keeping the "Why are Jews discriminated again?" short with just one or two paragraphs.
Then, expand and deepen your essay by adding two paragraphs or so that will be answering "Why is it so difficult for discrimination against Jews in Europe to disappear?" and MOST IMPORTANTLY "What should be done to reduce or eliminate anti-semitism? What are NPOs doing right now, and how can it be done more or more effectively?"
Good luck with the draft!